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2012-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1. He have a ability that people made provocative. 2. My boyfriend's prudent. 3. I gave the progect for him. Then he is querulous. 4. He and I are rancorous relation. 5. Sometime, I feling reclusive. Teacher you told me I find it so motivating. In fact, I know my effort is lack. If I large develop you are that for me, teaching is avery rewarding job. I will effort every day. I want you to always become happy morning. And thank you about posted a link sitcom. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for making your composition! I can see your improvement in our studies. However you should always practice any corrections I make so that you can use all of those in your daily conversations. Continue studying and be inspired with the beauty of learning! Be safe! T.Michelle  1.     He have a ability that people made provocative. >>He has an ability that provokes people.2. My boyfriend\'s prudent. >>Correct!3. I gave the progect for him. Then he is querulous. >>I gave the project to him and he became querulous.4. He and I are rancorous relation. >>I and him are related.5. Sometime, I feling reclusive. >>Sometimes I feel reclusive.Teacher you told me I find it so motivating. >>Teacher you told me To be motivated more.In fact, I know my effort is lack. >>In fact, I know my effort is lacking. If I large develop you are that for me, teaching is avery rewarding job. >>If I develop my skills, teaching would be rewarding for me.I will effort every day. >>I will make more efforts everyday.I want you to always become happy morning. >>I want eery mning to be happy.And thank you about posted a link sitcom. :) >>And thank you for the posted link sitcom.

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