HOMEWORK:
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
If you are to undergo a cosmetic surgery. What kind of opeartion would you choose and why?^^
Answer:
I didn't want to comestic surgery. because i like now **^^.
And If can operation, I will surgery for eyes and nouse.
want to eyes more bigger/.
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I didn\'t want to comestic surgery. because i like now **^^.
>> I don\'t want to undergo a cosmetic surgery because I like what I am now.
And If can operation, I will surgery for eyes and nouse.
>> If I have to undergo an operation, I want to have a reconstruction surgery in my eyes and nose. want to eyes more bigger/.
>> I want to make my eyes bigger.
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