HOMEWORK:

2012-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Janette

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HOMEWORK: If you are to undergo a cosmetic surgery. What kind of opeartion would you choose and why?^^ Answer: I didn't want to comestic surgery. because i like now **^^. And If can operation, I will surgery for eyes and nouse. want to eyes more bigger/.

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Hello my dear [이름] First of all, thank you for making your homework. You did a wonderful job. I hope that you will continue writing on your composition board. I made some corrections on your sentences below. Please take a look and study. I\'ll see you in class later. Have a wonderful time for now. T. Janette   I didn\'t want to comestic surgery. because i like now **^^. >> I don\'t want to undergo a cosmetic surgery because I like what I am now. And If can operation, I will surgery for eyes and nouse. >> If I have to undergo an operation, I want to have a reconstruction surgery in my eyes and nose. want to eyes more bigger/. >> I want to make my eyes bigger.

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