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학생이 쓴 원문
My most memorable childhood experience is when I visited China. Because China was beautiful and foods was delicious.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju A! ^^
Wow~ I didn\'t know you have been to China. ^^
Tell me more about it in class~
Wow~ I didn\'t know you have been to China. ^^
Tell me more about it in class~
Have a good night!
- T. Rina
1. My most memorable childhood experience is when I visited China.
>> My most memorable childhood experience was when I visited China.
2. Because China was beautiful and foods was delicious.
>> Because China was beautiful and foods were delicious.
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