Homework^^

2021-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

학생이 쓴 원문

If I see a old grandma I will ask the person if I can help. Then I will ask my parents if I can help the person. If my parents say ok I will help her . If I can’t help the person I will ask another person or grownup if I could help. So,I will help the old person. Thank you^^

강사 첨삭

Hello Ruby,

I am sorry, that I could not teach you today because I had to do something important. Anyway, thank you for doing your homework. ^ ^

-Rachel

If I see a old grandma I will ask the person if I can help.

>> If I see an old grandma struggling with something, I will ask her if she needs help.
Then I will ask my parents if I can help the person.

>> correct
If my parents say okay, I will help her .

>> correct
If I can’t help the person I will ask another person or grownup if I could help.

>> If I can\'t help the person, I will ask another person or a grown up if he/she could help.
So,I will help the old person.

>> correct

>> OR: So I will try to help the elderly.

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