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How many countries have you been to? There's a new cinema in town. Have you been there yet? I'm ready to go. Have you finished yet? Susie isn't here. She went to the shops for some bread. You have a great suntan, Sally. Have you been on holiday? My catholic superior So-Yeon left Hong Kong this morning. Another catholic superior Rhin will go to Germany and Italy on March. Another university superior Hye-Kyung will go to Singapore for her honeymoon on April. I envy them. I also went to Hong Kong last month. But I envy them as ever. So I found the way to solve my envy. I joined a trip club on the internet. I searched a travel information there. I browsed a travel review. And I joined duty free internet shop. I'm ready to trip wherever.

Hello Miss. [Name], thank you once again for making your homework today..:) Job well done on your composition my dear! You\'re able to express yourself well and I commend you for a job well done.. By the way, here are the following corrections that you had, just try to read and analyze why the following sentences are incorrect..:) Can\'t wait to talk to you again Miss. [Name]..^^ -Teacher Cam-   How many countries have you been to? >>correct!There\'s a new cinema in town. Have you been there yet? >>correct!I\'m ready to go. Have you finished yet? >>correct!Susie isn\'t here. She went to the shops for some bread. >>correct! >>Susie isn\'t here. She has gone to the shops for some bread. (past participle)You have a great suntan, Sally. Have you been on holiday?>>correct!My catholic superior So-Yeon left Hong Kong this morning.>>My catholic superior So-Yeon left for Hong Kong this morning. Another catholic superior Rhin will go to Germany and Italy on March.>>correct! Another university superior Hye-Kyung will go to Singapore for her honeymoon on April. >>correct!I envy them. >>correct!I also went to Hong Kong last month. >>correct!But I envy them as ever. >>correct!So I found the way to solve my envy. >>correct!I joined a trip club on the internet. >>correct!I searched a travel information there. >>I searched some information there.I browsed a travel review. >>I browsed some travel reviews.And I joined duty free internet shop. >>correct!I\'m ready to trip wherever. >>I\'m ready to go on a trip anywhere.