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Kindly answer this question in essay form.
What are the things that people don\'t usually know about you?
Most people around me, especially my parents don\'t know that I was lived in the Philippines. My original plan was studying English in Australia and Canada, but I changed my mind to play at that time instead of studying. I didn\'t have such a productive time while I stayed in the Philippines in the middle of twenty. So, I don\'t usually talk about it to people around me.
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Hi Homer! There are things about us that others don\'t know. It\'s what makes us unique amongst others. Some of them are good and some are not. Only a few people may know it; most especially the close ones to us. Sometimes it\'s also good to not expose your entire personality to other people for the sake of privacy.
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Most people around me, especially my parents don\'t know that I was lived in the Philippines.
>>Most people around me, especially my parents, don\'t know that I lived in the Philippines.
My original plan was studying English in Australia and Canada, but I changed my mind to play at that time instead of studying.
>> My original plan was to study English in Australia and Canada but I changed my mind. I just played instead of studying.
I didn\'t have such a productive time while I stayed in the Philippines in the middle of twenty.
>> I didn\'t have such a productive time when I stayed in the Philippines in my mid 20\'s.
So, I don\'t usually talk about it to people around me.
>> CORRECT
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