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Kindly answer this question in essay form.
What would you do if you where homeless?
If I were homeless, I might find a job immediately.
Everyone has their story and reason why they became homeless, but I believe that effort can make it change no matter what.
As long as I have the ability, and could get opportunities to work, I can save some money. And, it will let me stand by myself.
So, I would do any work to change the situation better.
강사 첨삭
Hi Homer! Being homeless is a very hard situation. A lot of people around the world are experiencing this. We should learn how to value money and use it wisely to avoid being in this situation. So whenever you see a homeless person, try to give them help if you can :)
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If I were homeless, I might find a job immediately.
>>If I were homeless, I will find a job immediately.
Everyone has their story and reason why they became homeless, but I believe that effort can make it change no matter what.
>>CORRECT
As long as I have the ability, and could get opportunities to work, I can save some money.
>>As long as I have the ability and have opportunities to work, I can save some money.
And, it will let me stand by myself.
>> This would let me stand by myself.
So, I would do any work to change the situation better.
>> So, I would do anything to make my situation better.
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