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2012-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Do you think that dysfunctional family life contributes to worsening relationships in society? I think that Family and society are auxiliary to each other. If dysfunctional family throw away their children, left-behind children who perhaps bringt up with his blood and guts. When children marry, they take some of their memory with guts, and continue the tradition with their children. Parents are obligated to support their children. A well brought up child is a greatest asset in society in the future. --------------------------------------------------------------------- hahaha~ teacher! thank you~! about your affair.

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Hi! Thank you for sending me your composition. I hope everything is doing fine. Take care always. -Teacher Faye- Do you think that dysfunctional family life contributes to worsening relationships in society?>>CorrectI think that Family and society are auxiliary to each other.>>CorrectIf dysfunctional family throw away their children, left-behind children who perhaps bringt up with his blood and guts. >>If a dysfunctional family threw away their children, the children that are left behind are brought up by their own choices.When children marry, they take some of their memory with guts, and continue the tradition with their children. >>When children get married, they take their memories and continue their tradition and pass it to their chilfren.Parents are obligated to support their children. >>CorrectA well brought up child is a greatest asset in society in the future.>> A well brought up child is an asset in the society.hahaha~ teacher! thank you~! about your affair. >>Correct  

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