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What are the positive impacts of the COVID-19 pandemic?
It\'s a very hard time to live in a covid-19 pandemic. But as our daily life has been changed a lot compared to before, these changes resulted in some positive impacts. And, I think the most positive impact is, improved nature environment especially some famous travel spot. For example, I saw the news that many people went to Boracay but the garbages and polluted water from them was not managed appropriately. So, the Philippines government announced not to enter Boracay Island. After that the natural environment of the place became clear. As of it, I think as many people are not going to travel, the natural environment has become clearer than before.
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Hi Steve! We have faced a lot of hardships during this pandemic. There has been a drastic change in our lifestyles. Despite that, there are still some good impacts to our daily lives.
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It\'s a very hard time to live in a covid-19 pandemic.
>> It\'s a very hard time to live during the Covid-19 pandemic.
But as our daily life has been changed a lot compared to before, these changes resulted in some positive impacts.
>> But as our daily lives changed, it resulted some positive impacts.
And, I think the most positive impact is, improved nature environment especially some famous travel spot.
>> I think the most positive impact is the improved of the environment especially in some famous travel spots.
For example, I saw the news that many people went to Boracay but the garbages and polluted water from them was not managed appropriately.
>> For example, I saw the news that many people went to Boracay but the garbage so the water was polluted. It was not managed properly/
So, the Philippines government announced not to enter Boracay Island.
>> So, the Philippines government announced the Boracay Island shall be closed until further notice.
After that the natural environment of the place became clear.
>> After that, the place became clean and clear.
As of it, I think as many people are not going to travel, the natural environment has become clearer than before.
>> Since a lot of people are not allowed to travel, mother nature has become clearer than before.
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