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2021-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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If I could change anything in my life, I want to go in my twenties and change my character. In twenties I was way too introverted and aimless person. I think If I were purposeful and extraverted person, I would live more satisfactory life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^^

I think we all have regrets~

But I know you will soon live a satisfactory life!

Cheer up! ^^

- T. Rina

1. If I could change anything in my life, I want to go in my twenties and change my character.
>> If I could change anything in my life, I would want to go back in my twenties and change my character.

2. In twenties I was way too introverted and aimless person.
>> In my twenties, I was way too introverted and an aimless person.

OR: In my twenties, I was too introverted and aimless.

3. I think If I were purposeful and extraverted person, I would live more satisfactory life.

>> I think if I were a purposeful and an extroverted person, I would live a more satisfactory life.

OR: I think if I were more purposeful and extroverted, I would live a more satisfactory life.

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