Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Among all the trips I have made, my trip to America was the most exciting. Because I met best friend whom I haven\'t met for a long time. I want to see her again, but I can\'t because of corona. I can\'t wait for the corona to end.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [Name] [이름]! I do hope that you meet your friend after the pandemic
~Teacher Aki
Among all the trips I have made, my trip to America was the most exciting.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> Out of the trips I had, my trip to America was the most thrilling.
Because I met best friend whom I haven\'t met for a long time.
>>> Because I met my best friend whom I haven\'t met for a long time.
I want to see her again, but I can\'t because of corona. I can\'t wait for the corona to end.
>>> I want to see her again, but I can\'t because of the Corona. I can\'t wait for the corona to end.
>>> I want to see her again, but I can\'t because of the Corona pandemic. I can\'t wait for the corona to end.
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