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If i can sell anything from my valuable things, I would sell my travel experience.
Becase I like traveling and planning travel.
When I plan travel, I would plan most carefully.
however, I travel freely once I start travel.
I think I could give somone tip about travel.
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Hi [이름]!
Wow, you really are quite the traveler. You can use that as a side line. If I will go on a trip, I will surely ask you :)
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As well as being useful, our possessions represent our extended selves. They provide a sense of past and tell us “who we are, where we have come from and perhaps where we are going.
If i can sell anything from my valuable things, I would sell my travel experience.
Becase I like traveling and planning travel.
When I plan travel, I would plan most carefully.
however, I travel freely once I start travel.
I think I could give somone tip about travel.
>> I think I can be the perfect person to get tips from when it comes to traveling.
>> If I can sell any valuable thing, I would sell my traveling experience.
Becase I like traveling and planning travel.
>> It\'s because I like traveling and planning travel trips.
When I plan travel, I would plan most carefully.
>> When I plan for a travel trip, I do it very carefully.
however, I travel freely once I start travel.
>>> However, I travel freely once I start.
I think I could give somone tip about travel.
>> I think I can be the perfect person to get tips from when it comes to traveling.
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