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2021-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

It was a trip to China. The public restroom in China was so dirty that I did not want to go again. It was 7,8 years ago, so it won\'t be now.

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Good day In [이름]! Thank you for diligently doin your homework :) Keep up the good work ^^
~Teach Aki :)
It was a trip to China. 
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> When I went to China.
The public restroom in China was so dirty that I did not want to go again.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>>The public restroom was so dirty that I did not want to go there again.
 It was 7,8 years ago, so it won\'t be now.
>>>CORRECT!
OR>>> That was 7 or 8 years ago, so it probably has improved by now.

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