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What does your dream house look like?
Someday if I can afford it, I want to buy a house where is located on a very high floor. I like to see the cityscape and sunset, but there\'s a 50+ level building is located across the street just in front of my window. So, I can\'t see the entire sky and sightseeing.
And second, It would be great if the ceiling is more than 5 meters because this condition makes me feel not stuffy.
The last one is an outdoor terrace where I can feel the breeze and cook some barbeque in the open air.
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Hi Homer!
Wow, your visualization of your dream house is nice. I wish I had a house like that as well.
>>Someday, if I can afford, I want to buy a house that is located at a very high floor.
I like to see the cityscape and sunset, but there\'s a 50+ level building is located across the street just in front of my window.
>> I like looking at the cityscape and sunset but there\'s 50+ leveled buildings blocking my view so I can\'t see the entire sky and scenerie.
So, I can\'t see the entire sky and sightseeing.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
And second, It would be great if the ceiling is more than 5 meters because this condition makes me feel not stuffy.
>> Second, it would be great if the ceiling would be more than 5 meters. This would make me feel more comfortable.
The last one is an outdoor terrace where I can feel the breeze and cook some barbeque in the open air.
>> CORRECT
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