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2021-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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I slept the longest when I woke up at 10 O.clock at the morning . and sleep at 10 O .clock , so i slept for 10 howers . and the next night I when\'t to bed at 10 O clock but I was not tired I slept at 11 O clock at night. my little sister slept also 10 howers. and I was not tired durning the day. thank you~

강사 첨삭

Hello Ruby,  
I think for growing kids like you, you need to sleep more so you can grow well, so it\'s totally great if you sleep more hours! ^ ^
-Rachel
I slept the longest when I woke up at 10 O.clock at the morning .
>> I slept the longest when I woke up at 10 o\'clock in the morning.
and sleep at 10 O .clock , so i slept for 10 howers .
>> I hit the sack at 10 at night, so I slept for more than ten hours.
and the next night I when\'t to bed at 10 O clock but I was not tired I slept at 11 O clock at night.
>> The next day, I went to bed at 10 again but I was not tired, so I slept a little bit late.
my little sister slept also 10 howers.
>> My little sister also slept for ten hours.
and I was not tired durning the day.
>> Because I slept a lot, I was not tired during the day.

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