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1. While the job is very interesting, it's also very badly paid. 2. We'll go to the mountains on Saturday as if it doesn't rain. 3. The winters here are very cold while the summers are very hot. 4. You can write the report when you want until it's ready by the end of the month. 5. It looks as if the government has got a lot of problems. It heavy snowed yesterday. The whole city was covered with white snow. It looked a beautiful sight and it was silence. This is a real winter. But I worried the way to work. It was getting colder at night. The road was frozen. I used to fall down when it snows. I have to take care if I should not fall down again. I'm tired to walk with neorvous

Hello Miss. [Name], thank you once again for dropping in your composition. Job well done on your writing skill my dear. By the way, I made some modifications on your composition. Just try to read and study the folling Miss. [Name]..:) Talk to you again later my dear^^ Teacher Cam 1. While the job is very interesting, it\'s also very badly paid.>>correct!2. We\'ll go to the mountains on Saturday as if it doesn\'t rain.>>We\'ll go to the mountains on Saturday as long as it doesn\'t rain.3. The winters here are very cold while the summers are very hot.>>correct!4. You can write the report when you want until it\'s ready by the end of the month.>>You can write the report when you want as long it\'s ready by the end of the month.5. It looks as if the government has got a lot of problems.>>correct!It heavy snowed yesterday. >>correct!The whole city was covered with white snow. >>correct!It looked a beautiful sight and it was silence. >>It looks beautiful and calm.This is a real winter. >>correct!But I worried the way to work. >>But I got worried on how to go to work. >>But how will I go to work?It was getting colder at night. >>correct!The road was frozen. >>correct!I used to fall down when it snows. >>correct!I have to take care if I should not fall down again. >>I have to take care of myself not to fall down again.I\'m tired to walk with neorvous >>I\'m getting tired of anxiously walking.