Homework

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I think 10years old good Because how to use the information

>> I think 10 years old is a good age to get a cellphone because they know how to use it.
And they are important With friends playing on cellphone

>> Cellphones are important and you can use it to play with friends.