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Do you think doing volunteer work is important? Why or why not?
I think it\'s important to volunteer to help. Because some of the people in our society are living a hard life whether they wanted or not. And, I think those people might not have enough energy to overcome their situation by themselves. So, I think if we gave even some help to them, it would be a great help.
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Hi Homer!
People choose to volunteer for a variety of reasons. For some it offers the chance to give something back to the community or make a difference to the people around them. For others it provides an opportunity to develop new skills or build on existing experience and knowledge.
I think it\'s important to volunteer to help.
>> I think it\'s important to volunteer in order to help other people.
Because some of the people in our society are living a hard life whether they wanted or not.
>> It\'s because some of the people in our society are living a hard life whether they want to or not.
And, I think those people might not have enough energy to overcome their situation by themselves.
>> And I think those people might not have enough energy to overcome their situation by themselves.
So, I think if we gave even some help to them, it would be a great help.
>> So if we give help to other people, it would mean a lot to the.
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