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What are some of your good habits?
My good habit is, waking up at 7 am in morning no matter when I slept. As time goes by since I started to work, I have to go to the office until 9 am, so I was adapted to wake up at the same time. Last night, I went to bed around 5 am, but after 2 hours, I just woke up from my sleep normally. So, I think this habit is good for preparing a day.
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Hi Homer!
Everything that you are today, and everything that you will ever accomplish, is determined by the quality of the habits that you form. By creating good habits and adopting a positive behavior, you too can become successful and live a prosperous life.
My good habit is, waking up at 7 am in morning no matter when I slept.
>> My good habit is waking up at 7 am in the morning despite what time I sleep.
As time goes by since I started to work, I have to go to the office until 9 am, so I was adapted to wake up at the same time.
>> Since I started working, I have to go to the office before 9 am, so I adapted to wake up at this certain time.
Last night, I went to bed around 5 am, but after 2 hours, I just woke up from my sleep normally.
>> Last night, I went to bed around 5 am, but after 2 hours, I just woke up from my sleep normally.
So, I think this habit is good for preparing a day.
>> So, I think this habit is good for preparing myself for the day.
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