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Who are the 3 people in your life that you can\'t live without? Explain your answers :)
It\'s my mother, father, and my younger brother. No matter how close my relation with friends is, they can\'t replace my family. As my parents raised me until I became an adult, I always appreciate my parents about unconditional love. So for me, despite I don\'t express my emotion to them, my family is unreplacable.
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Hi Homer!
There are people in our lives who certainly have a special spot in our hearts. We need to value their existence and cherish their moments with them.
It\'s my mother, father, and my younger brother.
>> CORRECT
No matter how close my relation with friends is, they can\'t replace my family.
>> No matter how close I am to my friends, they can\'t replace my family.
As my parents raised me until I became an adult, I always appreciate my parents about unconditional love.
>> As my parents raised me until I became an adult. I always appreciate my parents about their unconditional love.
So for me, despite I don\'t express my emotion to them, my family is unreplacable.
>> So for me, even though I don\'t express my emotions enough, my family is unreplaceable.
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