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Writing task: If you were in a position of power, do you think you would be corrupt?
I would not be corrupt If I got any position of power.
But I think I couldn\'t be a good boss, neither.
Because I’m not good at ordering something to other person and dealing with pressures and stress on me. I\'d like to be a nice co-worker, not a boss.
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Jasmin
I would not be corrupt If I got any position of power.
>>If I would be given a power, I will never be corrupt.
But I think I couldn\'t be a good boss, neither.
But I think I couldn\'t be a good boss, neither.
>>But I don\'t think I\'m not fit to be in a position of power.
Because I’m not good at ordering something to other person and dealing with pressures and stress on me.
Because I’m not good at ordering something to other person and dealing with pressures and stress on me.
>>I am not good at making orders and I\'m not capable of shouldering a lot of burdens.
I\'d like to be a nice co-worker, not a boss.
>>I\'d like to be a follower and not a leader.
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