homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I remind two things I appreciate in my life.
One is my family. My family is the root of self-esteem and stability.
The other is my friends. It\'s because my friends always give to me a good effect.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thanks for sharing what you think. Friends and family members are truly precious things to us. Also, thanks for your time and effort writing this, See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>I remember two things I appreciate in my life.
One is my family.
One is my family.
>>CORRECT!
My family is the root of self-esteem and stability.
>>One is my family. My family is the source of my self-esteem and stability.
The other is my friends.
The other is my friends.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s because my friends always give to me a good effect.
>>It\'s because my friends always have a positive influence on me.
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