homework 11.01

2023-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: Are there any countries that you would never visit? So, far I don\'t have a country don\'t like. Nevertheless there are some countries that don\'t want to go. Among them, I will don\'t go some countries in South-America. I watched some articles about some South-America Some South-America countries have a high crime rates and tourist also to dangerous. And the Ministry of Foreign Affairs tell us that it is not recommended So, many people don\'t recommend several South-America. I think so too, I don\'t have plan visit for safety.

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Are there any countries that you would never visit?

So, far I don\'t have a country don\'t like.

>> So, far I don\'t have a country that don\'t like.

Nevertheless there are some countries that don\'t want to go.

>> Nevertheless there are some countries that I don\'t want to go.

Among them, I will don\'t go some countries in South-America.

>> Among them, I don\'t want to go to some countries in South America.

I watched some articles about some South-America

>> I watched some articles about some South American countries.

Some South-America countries have a high crime rates and tourist also to dangerous.

>> Some South American countries have high crime rates and tourists are also at danger.

And the Ministry of Foreign Affairs tell us that it is not recommended

>> The Ministry of Foreign Affairs also tells us that it is not recommended to go there.

So, many people don\'t recommend several South-America.

>> So, many people don\'t recommend several South American countries.

I think so too, I don\'t have plan visit for safety.

>> I think so too, I don\'t have plans to visit there, it\'s also for my safety.

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