Homework(11/04): gossip

2016-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend Jen. I explored POWERenglish homepage , saw all pictures there of "2016 holloween superhero contest" and voted No.10. But I don't know who she is. haha. Maybe No.10 is just you, isn't it? = body = I think most of people like to listen to gossip. It is a nature of human. Especially Female seems to prefer to listen to gossip. when we chat with someone or drink with others, a gossip make the atmosphere better and fun. But We have to pay attention about a groundless rumor, have to not agree and share carelessly because the party is able to take a massive, unexpected damages by ours. Nevertheless liking to listen to gossip will not likely to decrease. The only way we can do is to teach our children about how to listen and act .

강사 첨삭

Hahahaha!!!

Thanks, Oh!! Thank you for your homework! Have a great weekend with your wife and have fun!!!

I don\'t know who is number 10.

T, Jeny

Friend Jen.

>>correct
I explored POWERenglish homepage , saw all pictures there of \"2016 Halloween superhero contest\" and voted No.10.

>>correct

But I don\'t know who she is. haha. Maybe No.10 is just you, isn\'t it?
>>correct
= body =
I think most of people like to listen to gossip.

>>correct

It is a nature of human.

>>It is human nature

Especially Female seems to prefer to listen to gossip.

>>Especially females, they seem to prefer listening to gossip.
when we chat with someone or drink with others, a gossip make the atmosphere better and fun.

>>When we chat with someone or drink with others, gossiping makes the atmosphere better and funnier.
But We have to pay attention about a groundless rumor, have to not agree and share carelessly because the party is able to take a massive, unexpected damages by ours. \\

>>But we have to pay attention about groundless rumors, we don\'t need to agree and share it carelessly because the other party will use it as a massive unexpected damage on us.

Nevertheless liking to listen to gossip will not likely to decrease.

>>Nevertheless, enjoying listening to gossip will not likely to decrease.

The only way we can do is to teach our children about how to listen and act .

>>The only way we can do is to teach our children about how to listen and react.

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