homework 11.08
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Would you like to retire early, at the typical age, or continue working for as long as possible?
I haven\'t thought about retire yet.
Because, it\'s mostly my age when we start working.
So I think now if I choose my retirement age, I will choose typical age.
These days, many people want retire early age.
And they enjoy life after retire, doing what they want to do.
But, I think the most important thing is financial.
Because If they don\'t have enough financial, they are reverse retirement.
They\'re going to return to work.
So in my case, I will consider when my typical retirement age.
And then later, I will think about working for as long time or retire.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Would you like to retire early, at the typical age, or continue working for as long as possible?
I haven\'t thought about retire yet.
Please answer the question:
Would you like to retire early, at the typical age, or continue working for as long as possible?
I haven\'t thought about retire yet.
>> I haven\'t thought about retirement yet.
Because, it\'s mostly my age when we start working.
>> It\'s because mostly at this age, it is when we start working.
So I think now if I choose my retirement age, I will choose typical age.
>> So I think now if I choose my retirement age, I will choose the typical age.
These days, many people want retire early age.
>> These days, many people want to retire at an early age.
And they enjoy life after retire, doing what they want to do.
>> They also enjoy their life after retirement, doing what they want to do.
But, I think the most important thing is financial.
>> But, I think the most important thing is financial stability.
Because If they don\'t have enough financial, they are reverse retirement.
>> If they are not financially stable, they will have a reverse retirement.
They\'re going to return to work.
>> CORRECT!
So in my case, I will consider when my typical retirement age.
>> So in my case, I will consider my typical retirement age.
And then later, I will think about working for as long time or retire.
>> And then later, I will think about working for a long time or early retirement.
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