homework 11.10
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
In your opinion, which country makes the best movies?
I think the U.S is a makes the best movie make country.
The reason why I think U.S movies have been strong since a long time ago.
There has showing many masterpieces, and now it has a lot of capital and famous actors.
And it\'s still the top of movie market in the world.
So many movie workers want to work in U.S movie industry.
I don\'t think there will be other country that can win the U.S in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
In your opinion, which country makes the best movies?
I think the U.S is a makes the best movie make country.
Please answer the question:
In your opinion, which country makes the best movies?
I think the U.S is a makes the best movie make country.
>> I think the country that makes the best movies is the US.
The reason why I think U.S movies have been strong since a long time ago.
>> Let me tell you the reason why I think U.S movies have been strong since a long time ago.
There has showing many masterpieces, and now it has a lot of capital and famous actors.
>> They show many masterpieces, and now they have earned a lot of profit and gained many famous actors.
And it\'s still the top of movie market in the world.
And it\'s still the top of movie market in the world.
>> And they still dominate the movie market worldwide.
So many movie workers want to work in U.S movie industry.
>> So many movie workers want to work in the U.S movie industry.
I don\'t think there will be other country that can win the U.S in the future.
>> I don\'t think there will be other countries that can win against the U.S in the future.
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