Homework 11
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. What If You Could Eat Only One Food For The Rest Of Your Life. What Food Would You Choose And Why?
A. I would choose \"Bibimbob\", Korean food, which is a boiled rice with assorted mixtures of vegetables and meats so that I can intake every essential nutrient in one food.
And it is more delicious when you put spicy sauce and sesame oil in it.
While I was in traveling, I cooked this food for my foreign friends and they really liked it.
As it is healthy food, I recommend it to people who want to live their life longer.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Nice of you to share! I would like to add this to my meal and probably have it once a day. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I would choose \"Bibimbob\", Korean food, which is a boiled rice with assorted mixtures of vegetables and meats so that I can intake every essential nutrient in one food.
>>I would choose the Korean food \"bibimbap\" which is made of rice, mixtures of assorted vegetables and meat; it\'s like having all the nutrients you need in one dish.
And it is more delicious when you put spicy sauce and sesame oil in it.
And it is more delicious when you put spicy sauce and sesame oil in it.
>>CORRECT
While I was in traveling, I cooked this food for my foreign friends and they really liked it.
While I was in traveling, I cooked this food for my foreign friends and they really liked it.
>>While I was abroad, I cooked this food for my foreign friends and they really liked it.
As it is healthy food, I recommend it to people who want to live their life longer.
As it is healthy food, I recommend it to people who want to live their life longer.
>>As it is a healthy food, I recommend it to people who want to live longer.
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