Homework 11
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Is there anything you would like to change about you and your life?- (^-^)
A. I want to change my introvert personality. Every time I go to somewhere or go in the group for the first time, I have a hard time to get along with them. I tend to be too much conscious of other people. So I can\'t express my feelings and my abilities well. I think I need to get myself out of a small room in my mind to do what I want. And don\'t harsh on me and focus on and love myself more.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thanks for taking the time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Thanks for sharing as well! But remember, being an introvert is not that bad at all. Being an introvert makes for an absolutely good listener. Which is a good thing because these days, people just want to have somebody to listen to them! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
Every time I go to somewhere or go in the group for the first time, I have a hard time to get along with them.
>>Every time I go somewhere and meet people for the first time, I really have a hard time getting along with them.
I tend to be too much conscious of other people.
>>CORRECT
So I can\'t express my feelings and my abilities well.
>>CORRECT
I think I need to get myself out of a small room in my mind to do what I want.
>>I think I need to get out of my comfort zone so I can be what I want to be.
And don\'t harsh on me and focus on and love myself more.
>>And not to be too harsh on myself but rather focus on loving me.
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