homework 11/11 essay

2015-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear [Name]'s Pepero day ! Thanks for you advise about free talking today. Tomorrow, I want to have a free talking about today's essay topic, "Whose advice do you follow more, your parents’ or your friends’ advice?". I will prepare it. By the way, Do you know Pepero day in korea. Pepero is the famous cake of stick style with spread chocolate. The shape is equal to arabic numerals 1. toady is 11th month and 11th day. for example 2015-11-11. At Evrery year today, Many peoples, especially lovers, give and take Pepero cake each other. Pepero day is especially the best business day in confectionery industry. Pronunciation of Pepero must be strongly pronounced at part of "P" spell as follows "PPePPero" beacuse "PP" spell in korea is not in english.

강사 첨삭

Oh!!! Sorry I just read your homework now.

Don\'t worry we will talk about the essay tomorrow.

Yes, I know that it was Pepero day, yesterday. I forgot to great you heheheeh!!!

My daughter also likes this snacks but I guess it\'s quite expensive here in the Philippines.

Have a wonderful day, Oh!!!!

T. Jeny


Dear [Name]

>>correct
It\'s Pepero day !

>>correct
Thanks for you advise about free talking today.

>>Thanks for your advice about our free talking class today.
Tomorrow, I want to have a free talking about today\'s essay topic,

>>Tomorrow, I want to have a free talking class about today\'s essay topic.`
\"Whose advice do you follow more, your parents’ or your friends’ advice?\".

>>correct
I will prepare it.

>>I will prepare something about this topic.
By the way, Do you know Pepero day in korea.

>>By the way, Do you know that it is Pepero day in Korea?
Pepero is the famous cake of stick style with spread chocolate.
>>Pepero is a famous snack with chocolate on a bread stick.

The shape is equal to arabic numerals 1.
>>The shape is equal to Arabic numeral 1.

toady is 11th month and 11th day. for example 2015-11-11.
>>Today is 11th month of 11th day like 2015-11-11.

At Evrery year today, Many peoples, especially lovers, give and take Pepero cake each other.
>>Every year, many people exchange Pepero with each other, especially for lovers.

Pepero day is especially the best business day in confectionery industry.
>>Pepero day is a special business day for confectionery industry.
Pronunciation of Pepero must be strongly pronounced at part of \"P\" spell as follows \"PPePPero\" beacuse \"PP\" spell in korea is not in english.

>>Pronunciation of Pepero must be strongly pronounced at part of \"P\" spell as follows \"PPePPero\" because \"PP\" spelled in Korea not in English.

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