Homework {11/13}

2020-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme: Make a sentence using the words below. 1. My Dad can rode bike with freehand but I think it\'s dangerous. 2. Strange creatures are in my drawing note. 3. I wrote about outer space but it\'s very dificault. 4. My imaginary is being good. 5. Have you had sleep paralysis?

강사 첨삭



Here\'s your homework, Clair! Catch you in class!

Cheers,
Jean~~


                           Theme: Make a sentence using the words below.


1. My Dad can rode bike with freehand but I think it\'s dangerous.
>> My dad can cycle freehand but I think it\'s dangerous. 
>> or: My dad can ride a bike no-handed, but I think it\'s dangerous. 
>> or: My dad can ride with no hands on a bike, but I believe it\'s quite dangerous. 

2. Strange creatures are in my drawing note.
>> Strange creatures are in my drawing notebook. 
>> or: There are strange creatures in my drawing collection. 

3. I wrote about outer space but it\'s very dificault. [Mind the spelling of \'difficult\'.]
>> I wrote an essay about outer space but it was very difficult. 

4. My imaginary is being good.
>> [I don\'t exactly understand your example sentence.]
>> Examples: 1.) My imaginary friend is a stuffed toy. 
>> 2.) I had an imaginary friend when I was a child. 

5. Have you had sleep paralysis?
>> correct
>> or: Have you ever experienced sleep paralysis? 

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