homework 11.13

2023-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: What food can you cook best? I am confident in cooking foods are fried rice and japan style curry rice. I think these foods are relatively easy cook. In the case of fired rice, there are various, many recipes posted on the Internet. So I can it easy to follow. And in the case of curry rice, we can find curry powder or sauce in the grocery store. So I can make it put in various vegetables and meat in it. I think cooking is looks easy, but there are many more difficult things.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What food can you cook best?

I am confident in cooking foods are fried rice and japan style curry rice.

>> I am confident in cooking food such as fried rice and Japanese-style curry rice.

I think these foods are relatively easy cook.

>> I think these food are relatively easy to cook.

In the case of fired rice, there are various, many recipes posted on the Internet.

>> In the case of fried rice, there are many recipes posted on the Internet.

OR >> In the case of fried rice, there are various recipes posted on the Internet.

So I can it easy to follow.

>> And because of it, it\'s easy to follow.

And in the case of curry rice, we can find curry powder or sauce in the grocery store.

>> CORRECT!
So I can make it put in various vegetables and meat in it.

>> So I can put in various vegetables and meat in it.

I think cooking is looks easy, but there are many more difficult things.

>> I think cooking looks easy, but there are many more difficult things.

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