Homework 11/15
학생이 쓴 원문
A: what is happiness for you?
I feel happy from little things. I walked on the road, listen to good music, and than, sun shine was so good. and with someone who love. I feel happiness!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Sophie! I think you are really a happy person. And I like that kind of personality. ^^
~~May~~
I feel happy from little things.
>> CORRECT GRAMMAR
I walked on the road, listen to good music, and than, sun shine was so good. and with someone who love.
>> I walk on the road, listen to good music, the sun shines brightly, and with someone you love.
I feel happiness!!
>> I feel happy!
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