homework 11/16 : About values of society.

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Dear [Name].

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Today\'s topic is very difficult for me.

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Value of society means the value that a personal or a community is worth pursuing.

>>Value of society means the value that a person or a community is worth pursuing.

It is not right and wrong value but difference thing.

>>It is not having the right and wrong values but more of our diferences.
Therefore there is Inevitably a conflict between the difference of values.

>>Therefore, there is an inevitable conflict between the two.
When those conflicts are wisely resolved and harmonious, society will be developed.

>>When those conflicts are wisely and harmoniously resolved, the society will develop.
There are many conflicts now , like between religions, generations,traditional and modern, authority and freedom,wealth distribution, etc.
>>There are many conflicts these days, like religion, generation, tradition, authority, freedom, wealth distribution, etc.
Inter-religious conflict was causing current France situation.

>>Inter-religious conflict is the cause of the current situation in France.
The conflict between authority and freedom is occurring in many developing countries containing Korea.

>>The conflict between authority and freedom is occurring in many developing countries including Korea.

And the conflict of wealth distribution is occurring in the whole world.
>>And the conflict about wealth distribution is occurring in the whole world.
I think the root cause is not accepting those differences.

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I think the values of society is not losing but already lost now in Korea.
>>I think the value of society is not diminishing but it\'s already gone in Korea.
Sorry for my negative thought about our country.

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But It\'s the most important for the younger in our future.

>>But we need to think about the young generation\'s future.