Homework(11/16): To make the sentence correct

2016-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi, My friend. Thanks for you comment today. As you said, i will believe in myself. I thought about myself a lot but i am still poor at speaking English. But with long perseverance, i became a little confidence. That is also thank to you. I am very glad to talk about our country's situation. I hope many people's hope(?) will come true . You know the hope. haha == BODY == 1. She was angry at being left alone. 2. That woman dressed in black is my neighbor. 3. I'm sure there's no secret between you and me. 4. I must pay the bill today. 5. The dentist told him not to forget to brush his teeth before going to b

강사 첨삭

Hello OH!!!

I do believe that you are determine to enhance your abilities in English. I need to correct you more often so that you should be aware for your mistakes.

See yourself as a person who will be successful. So don\'t pull yourself down I know you can do it!
T. Jeny

Hi, My friend.

>>correct
Thanks for you comment today.

>>correct
As you said, i will believe in myself.

>>As you said, I have to believe in myself.
I thought about myself a lot but i am still poor at speaking English.

>>correct
But with long perseverance, i became a little confidence.

>>But with long perseverance, I became a little confident.
That is also thank to you.
>>That is also thanks to you.
I am very glad to talk about our country\'s situation.

>>correct
I hope many people\'s hope(?) will come true .

>>correct
You know the hope. haha
>>correct
== BODY ==
1. She was angry at being left alone.

>>correct
2. That woman dressed in black is my neighbor.

>>correct
3. I\'m sure there\'s no secret between you and me.

>>correct
4. I must pay the bill today.

>>correct
5. The dentist told him not to forget to brush his teeth before going to bed.

>>correct

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