Homework {11/17}
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. My life is incomplete without English. Moreover, I love Spanish too!
2. I am depending on my parents. However, Anna doesn\'t depends on her parents.
3. I want to have a front lawn, also backyard.
4. When I was 5, there are many vegetable patches in our kindergarden and I love it.
5. My house valcony is attractive somewhat.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!
I appreciate your sending your homework. Here\'s the corrected one. Catch you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme : Make a sentence using the words below.
1. My life is incomplete without English. Moreover, I love Spanish too!
>> correct~~
2. I am depending on my parents. However, Anna doesn\'t depends on her parents.
>> I\'m depending on my parents. However, Anna isn\'t depending on hers.
>> or: I depend on my parents. However, Anna doesn\'t depend on hers.
3. I want to have a front lawn, also backyard.
>> I want to have a front lawn, also a backyard.
4. When I was 5, there are many vegetable patches in our kindergarden and I love it.
>> When I was 5, there were many vegetable patches in our kindergarten and I loved it. [Please note the spelling of \"kindergarten\".]
5. My house valcony is attractive somewhat.
>> My house balcony is attractive somewhat. [Please note the spelling of \"balcony\".]
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