homework 11.17
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think you have habits that annoy other people?
Yes, I tend to fix it when I heard from other people that If I have a bad habits.
For example, bad meal manners, bad conversation habits, and so on.
But, even if I try to fix, there are some difficult.
It\'s a snoring.
I heard from other people that I snoring when I sleep after a tiring day.
The problem is when I go trip with my friends.
When I sleep with my friends, my snoring wakes up to my friends.
So, their said to me \" it\'s hard to sleep because your snoring.\"
But, I can\'t fix my snoring habit.
So, as a solution, these days when I before the trip with my friends I book a room with a separate room.
And I go separate room.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think you have habits that annoy other people?
Yes, I tend to fix it when I heard from other people that If I have a bad habits.
Please answer the question:
Do you think you have habits that annoy other people?
Yes, I tend to fix it when I heard from other people that If I have a bad habits.
>> Yes, I tend to fix it when I heard from other people that I have bad habits.
For example, bad meal manners, bad conversation habits, and so on.
>> Examples are bad meal manners, bad conversation habits, and so on.
But, even if I try to fix, there are some difficult.
>> But, even if I try to fix it, there are some difficulties.
It\'s a snoring.
>> It\'s snoring.
I heard from other people that I snoring when I sleep after a tiring day.
>> I heard from other people that I snore when I sleep after a tiring day.
The problem is when I go trip with my friends.
>> The problem occurs when I go on a trip with my friends.
When I sleep with my friends, my snoring wakes up to my friends.
>> When I sleep with my friends, my snoring wakes my friends.
So, their said to me \" it\'s hard to sleep because your snoring.\"
>> So, they said to me \" it\'s hard to sleep because you\'re snoring.\"
But, I can\'t fix my snoring habit.
>> CORRECT!
So, as a solution, these days when I before the trip with my friends I book a room with a separate room.
So, as a solution, these days when I before the trip with my friends I book a room with a separate room.
>> So, as a solution, these days before the trip with my friends, I book a room with a separate room.
And I go separate room.
And I go separate room.
>> And I go to the separate room.
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