homework 11/17 : The best way to diet
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강사 첨삭
Hello Oh.
Don\'t worry about me I feel good. I always think in a positive way just think you. I\'ve learned that from you. Thank you,
friend.
I don\'t need to complain anything about it because I made all the decisions in my life. Thank you for opening my eyes to reality.
Friend Jeny
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I was surprised today morning at hearing your worry.
>>I was surprised to hear your voice, worried about something.
Please don\'t be bothering about it.
>>Please don\'t be bothered about that.
You have a charm, calm, soothing and active voice for me.
>>You have a charming, calming, soothing and an active voice for me.
But Some students can think your voice as inactive or dark voice.
>>But some students can think that your voice sounds inactive and low.
Please open your mind at their complain.
>>Please open your mind with their complains.
and if you need to change your voice, please try to do that some degree.
>>And if you need to change your voice, please try to do it in some degree.
You can do it. and don\'t be disappointed.
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and i always say to your manager that you are gooood teacher.
>>And I always say to your manager that you are a good teacher.
Merrily see you tomorrow, friend.
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= body =
The best way to diet is only to proper exercise.
>>the best way to exercise is to have a proper exercise.
Many women try to diet by taking a medicine or starving.
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But yon know well that those are not useful more.
>>But you know well that those are not useful.
You know I regularly exercise 2~3 times in a week for 30 or 1 hour like running, push-up, sit-up,walking and lifting up dumbbell, etc.
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I exercised for 10 years more.
>>I have been exercising for more than 10 years.
As the result, I am a weighing 10kg or less.
>>As a result, I lost 10 kg or less.
I weigh 76kg now.
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I exercised for my health first.
>>I exercise for my health.
Diet is a natural by-product of exercise.
>>Diet will become natural by exercising.
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