Homework(11/18): Simple past or past perfect tense.

2016-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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HI, Friend. Thanks for your attention about tomorrow's massive rally. I will take care myself and my wife. I wondering anyone doesn't know what it will be happened. However, I want the rally to be peaceful rally, if not so, current government, policy, ruling party and extreme conservatives can strike back, as an excuse for it. I would like to show that it is justice in Korea. Have a happy weekend with your family. == BODY == 1. When I opened the door, I found the cat sleeping on my bed. 2. As she had left in the morning, I could not meet her. 3. There was an explosion near the castle. 4. The children delivered a spectacular performance. 5. The girls danced while the boys sang 6. I looked around but I did not see anything. 7. The patient had died before they reached the hospital. 8. He rushed to call his wife. 9. They were poor and hence they ran the household with great difficulty. 10. She(?) left the new clothes on the table.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!! Be safe and be careful!!! I know God will guide you and your wife. Have a wonderful day!!! I know with our activity in class; it can help you improve and enhance your skills in English. T. Jeny   HI, Friend. >>correctThanks for your attention about tomorrow\'s massive rally. >>correctI will take care myself and my wife. >>correctI wondering anyone doesn\'t know what it will be happened. >>I am wondering because no one knows what will happen.However, I want the rally to be peaceful rally, if not so, current government, policy, ruling party and extreme conservatives can strike back, as an excuse for it. >>However, I want it to be a peaceful rally, if not so, the current government, policy, ruling and the conservative parties will strike back, as an excuse for it. I would like to show that it is justice in Korea. >>I would like to see justice in Korea.Have a happy weekend with your family. >>correct== BODY ==1. When I opened the door, I found the cat sleeping on my bed. >>correct2. As she had left in the morning, I could not meet her. >>correct3. There was an explosion near the castle. >>correct4. The children delivered a spectacular performance. >>correct5. The girls danced while the boys sang >>correct6. I looked around but I did not see anything. >>correct7. The patient had died before they reached the hospital. >>correct8. He rushed to call his wife. >>correct9. They were poor and hence they ran the household with great difficulty. >>correct10. She(?) left the new clothes on the table. >>correct

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