homework 11/20 : My all-time favorite movies.
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Friend Jeny.
I was mumbled so much today morning because of my insufficient preparation.
I didn't prepare for my class due to extremely being tired.
Sorry for my laziness.
Have a happy weekend and see you Monday!
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My all-time favorite movie are as follows, regardless of the order i like.
- Gone with the wind.
- Sound of music (Musical)
- les miserable (Musical)
- all kinds of silent movies starring Charlie Chaplin.
- animation "Tom and Jerry"
- animation "Frozen"
- For whom the bell tolls
- BEN HUR
- The 10 commandments
- Love story
- Home alone series
- all kinds of movies starring Bruce Lee.
- Leon
- Indianna Jones series
etc
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Hello Oh!
You do have a lot of favorites.... hehehehehe.
I also love some of those movies... I guess watching movies can help me relax and release my stress.
Take care Oh!!!
I hope you\'ll feel better soon.
T. Jeny
Friend Jeny.
>>correctI was mumbled so much today morning because of my insufficient preparation.
>>I mumbled a lot in our class this morning because of insufficient preparation.I didn\'t prepare for my class due to extremely being tired.
>>I didn\'t prepare for my class due to extemely being tired.Sorry for my laziness.
>>correctHave a happy weekend and see you Monday!>>correct=BODY=My all-time favorite movie are as follows, regardless of the order i like.>>My all-time favorites movie are as follows: regardless of it\'s order.- Gone with the wind.
>>correct- Sound of music (Musical)
>>correct- les miserable (Musical)
>>correct- all kinds of silent movies starring Charlie Chaplin.
>>correct- animation \"Tom and Jerry\"
>>correct- animation \"Frozen\"->>correct
For whom the bell tolls>>correct
- BEN HUR>>correct
- The 10 commandments>>correct
- Love story>>correct
- Home alone series>>correct
- all kinds of movies starring Bruce Lee.
>>correct- Leon
>>correct- Indianna Jones series etc.
>>correct
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