homework 11/20 : My all-time favorite movies.

2015-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend Jeny. I was mumbled so much today morning because of my insufficient preparation. I didn't prepare for my class due to extremely being tired. Sorry for my laziness. Have a happy weekend and see you Monday! =BODY= My all-time favorite movie are as follows, regardless of the order i like. - Gone with the wind. - Sound of music (Musical) - les miserable (Musical) - all kinds of silent movies starring Charlie Chaplin. - animation "Tom and Jerry" - animation "Frozen" - For whom the bell tolls - BEN HUR - The 10 commandments - Love story - Home alone series - all kinds of movies starring Bruce Lee. - Leon - Indianna Jones series etc

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Hello Oh! You do have a lot of favorites.... hehehehehe. I also love some of those movies... I guess watching movies can help me relax and release my stress. Take care Oh!!! I hope you\'ll feel better soon. T. Jeny   Friend Jeny. >>correctI was mumbled so much today morning because of my insufficient preparation. >>I mumbled a lot in our class this morning because of insufficient preparation.I didn\'t prepare for my class due to extremely being tired. >>I didn\'t prepare for my class due to extemely being tired.Sorry for my laziness. >>correctHave a happy weekend and see you Monday!>>correct=BODY=My all-time favorite movie are as follows, regardless of the order i like.>>My all-time favorites movie are as follows: regardless of it\'s order.- Gone with the wind. >>correct- Sound of music (Musical) >>correct- les miserable (Musical) >>correct- all kinds of silent movies starring Charlie Chaplin. >>correct- animation \"Tom and Jerry\" >>correct- animation \"Frozen\"->>correct  For whom the bell tolls>>correct - BEN HUR>>correct - The 10 commandments>>correct - Love story>>correct - Home alone series>>correct - all kinds of movies starring Bruce Lee. >>correct- Leon >>correct- Indianna Jones series etc. >>correct

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