homework 11.21
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What would you do to save our environment?
We are doing various activities to save the environment.
I don\'t think I will do it if someone who tell me to do environmental movement by myself.
Because, they don\'t give me motivation for environmental movements.
Instead, these days, the several major company participate in the environmental movement first.
The participation of these companies motivates the general people for the movement.
A typical example is the recycling movement.
This mean is If you collect electronics or disposable items and bring them to several store, they change them to mileage what you can buy items.
So, these events are changing people\'s perceptions of environmental movements.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What would you do to save our environment?
We are doing various activities to save the environment.
Please answer the question:
What would you do to save our environment?
We are doing various activities to save the environment.
>> CORRECT!
I don\'t think I will do it if someone who tell me to do environmental movement by myself.
I don\'t think I will do it if someone who tell me to do environmental movement by myself.
>> I don\'t think I will do it if someone tells me to do environmental movements by myself.
Because, they don\'t give me motivation for environmental movements.
Because, they don\'t give me motivation for environmental movements.
>> Because, they don\'t give me motivation to do environmental movements.
Instead, these days, the several major company participate in the environmental movement first.
>> Instead, these days, several major companies participate in the environmental movement first.
The participation of these companies motivates the general people for the movement.
The participation of these companies motivates the general people for the movement.
>> CORRECT!
A typical example is the recycling movement.
A typical example is the recycling movement.
>> CORRECT!
This mean is If you collect electronics or disposable items and bring them to several store, they change them to mileage what you can buy items.
This mean is If you collect electronics or disposable items and bring them to several store, they change them to mileage what you can buy items.
>> This mean if you collect electronics or disposable items and bring them to several stores, they change them to mileage on whatever items you can buy.
So, these events are changing people\'s perceptions of environmental movements.
>> CORRECT!
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