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2021-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme : Make a sentence using the word or expressions below. 1. I will get a reward when I pass the social study test. 2. When you wanna be a writer, you have to have a fountain pen. 3. I had a Spanish test and it was 50-item test. 4. The full score is 1000 and when you get more then 550 point, you get pessed. 5. I got 153 points for the tesk.

강사 첨삭

Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름]!
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Cheers,
Jean



             Theme : Make a sentence using the word or expressions below.


1. I will get a reward when I pass the social study test.
>> I\'ll receive a reward when I pass the social studies test. 
[Note: The subject is called Social Studies.]

2. When you wanna be a writer, you have to have a fountain pen.
>> When you want to be a writer, you have to have a fountain pen.
>> or: Having a fountain pen is essential to a writer. 

3. I had a Spanish test and it was 50-item test.
>> I had a Spanish test and it was a 50-item test.

4. The full score is 1000 and when you get more then 550 point, you get pessed.
>>  The full score is 1000 and when you get more than 550 points, you passed. [Please note the spelling of the word \"passed\".]

5. I got 153 points for the tesk.
>> I got 153 points for the task. [Please note the spelling of the word \"task\".]

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