HOMEWORK (11/22 Thu) : Does success change people?

My answer is yes : success changes people in many ways. In terms of positive effects of success, people can develop their hidden abilities through success if they create success with lots of efforts and contributions. For example, I studied a lot when I prepared an university entrance exam. Finally, I got an admission from Korea University, and I could extend my viewpoint and have useful life experiences as hanging out with various friends who have different idea and various talents. On the other hand, success can change people in negative ways. We can see many people who are in pleasure with their luck and success, but fall in failure abrubtly after short time passes away.

Hi there! Thank you for sharing your ideas with me. I agree with all of your thoughts here. Just check my corrections below. teacher KELLY My answer is yes : success changes people in many ways. >> Correct >> I agree with the statement that success changes people in many ways.In terms of positive effects of success, people can develop their hidden abilities through success if they create success with lots of efforts and contributions. >> In terms of the positive effects of success, people can develop and show their hidden abilities by exerting so much effort in whatever they do.  For example, I studied a lot when I prepared an university entrance exam. >> For example, I studied very hard in preparation to my university entance exams.  Finally, I got an admission from Korea University, and I could extend my viewpoint and have useful life experiences as hanging out with various friends who have different idea and various talents.>>  Finally, I was admitted to enter Korea University. I can extend my ideas and life experiences by hanging out with various friends who have different ideas and talents. On the other hand, success can change people in negative ways. We can see many people who are in pleasure with their luck and success, but fall in failure abrubtly after short time passes away. >> On the other hand, success can change people negatively. We see people who enjoy the pleasure of luck and success but fall abruptly after a short period of time.