Homework 11.23
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What did you find the most surprising thing about the school system in the United States?
: When I watched highteen U.S. drama, I was surprised their school systems. Most surprising thing is prom party. At prom party, everyone dresses up with very beautiful clothes. I thought it will be fun. And, there are lockers in their hall and it is very new to me. We have lockers just front of our class and it is small t[이름] their.
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When I watched highteen U.S. drama, I was surprised their school systems.
>> When I watched Highteen, it\'s a U.S. drama, I was surprised by their school systems.
Most surprising thing is prom party.
>> The most surprising thing is the prom party.
At prom party, everyone dresses up with very beautiful clothes.
>> At the prom party, everyone dresses up in very beautiful clothes.
I thought it will be fun.
>> CORRECT!
And, there are lockers in their hall and it is very new to me.
>> CORRECT!
We have lockers just front of our class and it is small t[이름] their.
>> We have lockers just in front of our class and it is smaller t[이름] theirs.
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