Homework(11.25)
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Can you talk about your best friend?
One of my close buddies is Kyung-uk, Korean name, and we know each other for 20 years. We went to the same middle, high school, and even a university. We always played basketball after school and studied together in the library at weekends. We shared every life stories with each other. Recently we seldom meet due to our jobs and live in different cities, but still get in touch and say hello once a week.
2. (To Donna: I changed question because I\'ve already done as Jean\'s homework. Please understand me.) What do you usually do with your friends?
We used to play basketball after school. When we were in our 20\'s, we hung out and had a beer, sometimes stayed at night kept laughing. Nowadays we usually track mountains and have a sauna, a Korean traditional bathing culture.
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Hello there [이름]!
No problem with the second question. I am glad to know that you have answered it already. The answers below are very good!
See you in class soon.
-T. Donna =)
One of my close buddies is Kyung-uk, Korean name, and we know each other for 20 years. We went to the same middle, high school, and even a university. We always played basketball after school and studied together in the library at weekends. We shared every life stories with each other. Recently we seldom meet due to our jobs and live in different cities, but still get in touch and say hello once a week.
>> Correct! Or: ...One of my close buddies is Kyung-uk, that\'s his Korean name...
2. (To Donna: I changed question because I\'ve already done as Jean\'s homework. Please understand me.) What do you usually do with your friends?
We used to play basketball after school. When we were in our 20\'s, we hung out and had a beer, sometimes stayed at night kept laughing. Nowadays we usually track mountains and have a sauna, a Korean traditional bathing culture.
2. (To Donna: I changed question because I\'ve already done as Jean\'s homework. Please understand me.) What do you usually do with your friends?
We used to play basketball after school. When we were in our 20\'s, we hung out and had a beer, sometimes stayed at night kept laughing. Nowadays we usually track mountains and have a sauna, a Korean traditional bathing culture.
>> We used to play basketball after school. When we were in our 20\'s, we hung out and had some beer, sometimes we stayed late at night and just kept laughing. Nowadays we usually track mountains and have sauna, a Korean traditional bathing culture.
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