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Nowadays,young generation really want to get a job.
there are few big company to get a high sallery.
but.it is diffiult to enter that company.
so, they have to study hard and need many spec.
If they don`t want to work all day long ,
they can work part time job.
but the sallery is very low. below 5 $ per hour.
if they were university student, they want to part time job.
because they need to take a time to study.
but after graduation , they need to fulltime job.
so, they have to study hard to get a good job.
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Nowadays,young generation really want to get a job.
>> correct there are few big company to get a high sallery.
>> There are few big companies that offer a high salary. ( spelling check: salary ^^) but.it is diffiult to enter that company.
>> But it is difficult to be hired in those companies. so, they have to study hard and need many spec.
>> So, they have to study hard and need many specs. If they don`t want to work all day long , they can work part time job.
>> If they don\'t want to work all day, they can work as a part time job. but the sallery is very low. below 5 $ per hour.
>> But the salary is very low, it is below 5$ per hour.
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