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2016-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Nowadays,young generation really want to get a job. there are few big company to get a high sallery. but.it is diffiult to enter that company. so, they have to study hard and need many spec. If they don`t want to work all day long , they can work part time job. but the sallery is very low. below 5 $ per hour. if they were university student, they want to part time job. because they need to take a time to study. but after graduation , they need to fulltime job. so, they have to study hard to get a good job.

강사 첨삭

Happy Monday [이름]! Thank you so much for your time. I appreciate that you did your homework. You did a great job. ^^ Have a great day. Teacher Nina   Nowadays,young generation really want to get a job. >> correct there are few big company to get a high sallery. >> There are few big companies that offer a high salary. ( spelling check: salary ^^) but.it is diffiult to enter that company. >> But it is difficult to be hired in those companies. so, they have to study hard and need many spec. >> So, they have to study hard and need many specs. If they don`t want to work all day long , they can work part time job. >> If they don\'t want to work all day, they can work as a part time job. but the sallery is very low. below 5 $ per hour. >> But the salary is very low, it is below 5$ per hour.

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