Homework 11.26
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What about the current crisis worries you the most? What gives you the most hope?
: The problem that I worry is about corona virus. For a few days infectees of this disease are increasing without precedent.
But a lot of people relax their attention and take off their mask. I think it is really serious problems in korea now. We have to recognize reality now and be careful.
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The problem that I worry is about corona virus. For a few days infectees of this disease are increasing without precedent.
>> The problem that I worry about is the coronavirus. For a few days, infectees of this disease are increasing without precedent.
But a lot of people relax their attention and take off their mask.
>> But a lot of people relax their attention and take off their masks.
I think it is really serious problems in korea now.
>> I think it is a really serious problem in Korea now.
We have to recognize reality now and be careful.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> We have to recognize the real situation now and be extra careful.
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