homework 11/26 : About being successful in your life

2015-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Friend Jeny. Due to character limit. I will go to the main subject. Have a happy day. I want to recommend a book , "THE 7 HABITS OF HIGHLY EFFECTIVE PEOPLE", written by Stephen R Covey. I have this book on the bookcase in my book room. but I have not completely read the book yet. haha. 7 habits are as follows: - 1. Be Proactive. - 2. Begin with the end in mind. - 3. Put first things first. - 4. Think Win-Win. - 5. Seek first to understand, Then to be understood. - 6. Synergize. - 7. Sharpen the saw. I can't understand above summaries fully. I advise someone, who want to be successful in one's life, to do as following. - 1. you first have a goal, even though it takes a long time. - 2. you start now and do your best for your goal. then the result is naturally should follow. - 3. if you achieve the goal, you have to challenge to new goal without pause. then you are already successful person, even though you fail it. because you've got a great lesson like "Wild ducks".

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!! ^^

That was an amazing composition! I will check the book.

I hope you keep on writing!

Keep up the great job!

Have a great evening ahead.

Teacher Jeny ^_^

 

Friend Jeny.

>>correct
Due to character limit.

>>Due to our limitations.

 I will go to the main subject.
>>correct

Have a happy day.

>>correct
I want to recommend a book , \"THE 7 HABITS OF HIGHLY EFFECTIVE PEOPLE\", written by Stephen R Covey.

>>correct
I have this book on the bookcase in my book room.

>>I have this on my bookshelf.
but I have not completely read the book yet. haha.
>>correct
7 habits are as follows:

>>correct
- 1. Be Proactive.

>>correct
- 2. Begin with the end in mind.

>>correct
- 3. Put first things first.

>>correct
- 4. Think Win-Win.

>>correct
- 5. Seek first to understand, Then to be understood.

>>correct
- 6. Synergize.

>>correct
- 7. Sharpen the saw.

>>correct

I can\'t understand above summaries fully.

>>correct
I advise someone, who want to be successful in one\'s life, to do as following.

>>correct
- 1. you first have a goal, even though it takes a long time.

>>You need to have a goal first even though it will take a long time.
- 2. you start now and do your best for your goal.

>>You need to start now and do your best to achieve your goal.
then the result is naturally should follow.

>>Then the result will naturally follow.
- 3. if you achieve the goal, you have to challenge to new goal without pause.

>>If you have already achieved a goal, challenge yourself to have another one and don\'t stop.

then you are already successful person, even though you fail it.

>>Then you will become successful even though you fail.

 because you\'ve got a great lesson like \"Wild ducks\".

>>correct

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