homework 11/26 : About being successful in your life
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Hi there!!! ^^
That was an amazing composition! I will check the book.
I hope you keep on writing!
Keep up the great job!
Have a great evening ahead.
Teacher Jeny ^_^
Friend Jeny.
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Due to character limit.
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I will go to the main subject.
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Have a happy day.
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I want to recommend a book , \"THE 7 HABITS OF HIGHLY EFFECTIVE PEOPLE\", written by Stephen R Covey.
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I have this book on the bookcase in my book room.
>>I have this on my bookshelf.
but I have not completely read the book yet. haha.
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7 habits are as follows:
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- 1. Be Proactive.
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- 2. Begin with the end in mind.
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- 3. Put first things first.
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- 4. Think Win-Win.
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- 5. Seek first to understand, Then to be understood.
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- 6. Synergize.
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- 7. Sharpen the saw.
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I can\'t understand above summaries fully.
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I advise someone, who want to be successful in one\'s life, to do as following.
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- 1. you first have a goal, even though it takes a long time.
>>You need to have a goal first even though it will take a long time.
- 2. you start now and do your best for your goal.
>>You need to start now and do your best to achieve your goal.
then the result is naturally should follow.
>>Then the result will naturally follow.
- 3. if you achieve the goal, you have to challenge to new goal without pause.
>>If you have already achieved a goal, challenge yourself to have another one and don\'t stop.
then you are already successful person, even though you fail it.
>>Then you will become successful even though you fail.
because you\'ve got a great lesson like \"Wild ducks\".
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