Homework(11/28) : Write an essay about RETIREMENT

1.Q: At this stage of your life, are you beginning to make plans for your retirement years? Why? A: No, I don't start to make plans for my retirement yet. I have just started to work 2.5 years ago, so it's too early for me to make a retirement plan. 2.Q: What would be a perfect retirement for you? A: As far as I'm concerned, a perfect retirement is to share what I have with other people as many as possible, and to contribute to this society as much as possible by doing what I can do. For example, I like to swim and I know how to swim properly. In my case, I will be able to help criples to learn how to swim. 3.Q: Where would you like to spend your retirement years? Why? A: I would like to spend my retirement years in east coast in South Korea. East coast is very clean, environment-friendly, beautiful, and quiet area. I wish to enjoy my old ages with natures. 4.Q: Do you intend to look for another job after you retire? Why? A: Yes, I will try to get another job after I retire.

Hello there! Wow, you really have great ideas on your mind. I can see how good person you are. I wish a lot of people with be like you. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Have a good night. See you in class^^ T.Kelly^^ 1.Q: At this stage of your life, are you beginning to make plans for your retirement years? Why?A: No, I don\'t start to make plans for my retirement yet. I have just started to work 2.5 years ago, so it\'s too early for me to make a retirement plan. >>No, I haven\'t started my plans for my retirements yet. I just started working for two and a half year so it\'s too early for me to plan for retirement.2.Q: What would be a perfect retirement for you?A: As far as I\'m concerned, a perfect retirement is to share what I have with other people as many as possible, and to contribute to this society as much as possible by doing what I can do. For example, I like to swim and I know how to swim properly. In my case, I will be able to help criples to learn how to swim. >>BETTER: In my own opinion, a perfect retirement is sharing what I have with other people, contributing good things to the society to the best that I can do. For example, I like to swim and I know how to swim properly. In my case, I will be able to help criples to learn how to swim. 3.Q: Where would you like to spend your retirement years? Why?A: I would like to spend my retirement years in east coast in South Korea. East coast is very clean, environment-friendly, beautiful, and quiet area. I wish to enjoy my old ages with natures. >>Correct4.Q: Do you intend to look for another job after you retire? Why?A: Yes, I will try to get another job after I retire. >> Yes, I will try to get antother job afte my retirement.