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2021-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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Theme : Note/Remember the words below. 1. I will get cash reward when I pass this Spanish test. 2. My older sister is a cashier at a national hotel. 3. My dad is a receptionist at a hotel. 4. He clasped his hands together.

강사 첨삭

Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름].
I appreciate your sending it. See you on Friday!

Cheers,
Jean~~



            Theme : Note/Remember the words below.


1. I will get cash reward when I pass this Spanish test.
>> I will get a cash reward when I pass this Spanish test.
>> or: I\'ll receive a cash reward if I passed my Spanish test. 

2. My older sister is a cashier at a national hotel.
>> or: My older sister is a cashier at an international hotel.

3. My dad is a receptionist at a hotel.
>> or: My dad works as a receptionist at a hotel.

4. He clasped his hands together.
>> CORRECT~~

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