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2016-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think, we are good at recycle stuff. our apartment, we have recycling day twice a month. second wednesday and 4th wednesday. we separate glass bottle,can,paper,battery,vinyle. clothes , shoese and sneakers. many koreans paticipate that movement. I think It is good . because we save the money and save the things. there for we contribute our environment.

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Good day to you [이름]! I am so proud of you. i am glad that you recycle things. There are a lot of things that we can do with plastic bottles and other stuffs. We can search it on the Internet. It might make our place more cozy and colorful. ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. I\'ll see you in class. Teacher Nina   I think, we are good at recycle stuff. >> I think we are good at recycling some stuffs. our apartment, we have recycling day twice a month. >> We have a recycling day twice a month in our apartment. second wednesday and 4th wednesday. >> It is held every second and fourth Wednesday of the month. we separate glass bottle,can,paper,battery,vinyle. clothes , shoese and sneakers. >> We separate glass, bottles, cans, papers, battery, vinyl, clothes , shoes and sneakers.many koreans paticipate that movement. >> Many Koreans participate in that movement. I think It is good . because we save the money and save the things. >> I think it is good because in that way we can save money and things that we can still use. there for we contribute our environment. >> Therefore, we do things that contribute in saving our environment.

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