homework (11/30)
학생이 쓴 원문
I think, we are good at recycle stuff.
our apartment,
we have recycling day twice a month.
second wednesday and 4th wednesday.
we separate glass bottle,can,paper,battery,vinyle. clothes , shoese and sneakers.
many koreans paticipate that movement.
I think It is good . because we save the money and save the things.
there for we contribute our environment.
강사 첨삭
Good day to you [이름]! I am so proud of you. i am glad that you recycle things. There are a lot of things that we can do with plastic bottles and other stuffs. We can search it on the Internet. It might make our place more cozy and colorful. ^^
Thank you for doing your homework.
I\'ll see you in class.
Teacher Nina
I think, we are good at recycle stuff.
>> I think we are good at recycling some stuffs.
our apartment, we have recycling day twice a month.
>> We have a recycling day twice a month in our apartment. second wednesday and 4th wednesday.
>> It is held every second and fourth Wednesday of the month. we separate glass bottle,can,paper,battery,vinyle. clothes , shoese and sneakers.
>> We separate glass, bottles, cans, papers, battery, vinyl, clothes , shoes and sneakers.many koreans paticipate that movement.
>> Many Koreans participate in that movement. I think It is good . because we save the money and save the things.
>> I think it is good because in that way we can save money and things that we can still use. there for we contribute our environment.
>> Therefore, we do things that contribute in saving our environment.
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